tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post7175172124134138423..comments2024-01-24T01:20:31.751-08:00Comments on BAUER POWER!: ancient egyptBetsy Bauerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08561853650526135932noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-75988783463955252062009-01-14T17:50:00.000-08:002009-01-14T17:50:00.000-08:00The character design in the #3 picture looks great...The character design in the #3 picture looks great. But the ear rings are a bit big and going to hit her shoulders all the time.Parkahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17581208018640652394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-22334849595522672532008-11-13T19:24:00.000-08:002008-11-13T19:24:00.000-08:00Thanks for the comments and critiques guys! Franc...Thanks for the comments and critiques guys! <BR/><BR/>Francesco-- Yes, I was noticing the anatomical errors, too. I'll definitely be fixing that up before using this piece for anything professional. Thanks for the tip on the brush!<BR/><BR/>Alex-- Yeah... I agree. I'm actually a bit unhappy with the final design. I hope some time to really push it because I like the character. Thanks!Betsy Bauerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08561853650526135932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-8621479617099807572008-11-12T12:44:00.000-08:002008-11-12T12:44:00.000-08:00im digging the character design...im thinking that...im digging the character design...im thinking that the rest of the body should be more pushed shape wise, kinda like what you did with the head and earrings. They all have nice shapes, i feel like i wanna see more of that in the body as well.Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12387406641916622311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-56015547600184973972008-11-11T19:27:00.000-08:002008-11-11T19:27:00.000-08:00Nice concept and nice roughs.Watch the perspective...Nice concept and nice roughs.<BR/>Watch the perspective on her crown, the ellipses are off, her right hand fingers could have a bit more rhythm to them, the anatomy of her left arm is off, you need to have some sort of hard edge to show where her elbow is. <BR/>in the second panel watch your perspective, your lines should all converge towards the same vanishing point, right now they're all going in different directions.<BR/>maybe try to use a different brush if you want to convey the softness of smoke.<BR/>In the character design, her right earring is in tangent with her shoulders.Francesco Giroldinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15919796381907160362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-21964703999014477932008-11-10T20:33:00.000-08:002008-11-10T20:33:00.000-08:00I like the mirror piece, the colors are nice.I like the mirror piece, the colors are nice.O C A S I Ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11176579460285608273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7569366239726673672.post-42944198272548767282008-11-09T17:39:00.000-08:002008-11-09T17:39:00.000-08:00That is so freakin' badass. When I opened up your ...That is so freakin' badass. When I opened up your page, I was like "Whoa!"Katya Anosovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14697703782351066584noreply@blogger.com